Tuesday, February 7, 2012

D1. Simple Collage

its just a cliff side on the shore of a sea with mountains in the back and two castles an old style ship during  a snowstorm at sunset. I didn't have anything particular in mind when I started putting it together. just started adding things that I thought would look good and that I thought would fit... I dont know how well the old style war plane fits but I needed more pictures to add in.... same goes for the trees and the sculpture there on the ice cliff.

8 comments:

Doom pants said...

very good composition.

perhaps blurring the edges of the individual elements to blend them into the background a bit better.

Franklyn said...

not exactly sure what I was wanting to do when I started this. all of the sky, including the sunset, and all the trees as well as the decorative sculpture (yes the one from campus) are all the pictures I took myself I took myself.

artst4christ said...

I like the idea, but the individual elements I would have like to seen better integrated especially the boat. Most of the images are more muted/blurry but the boat is extremely sharp.

Curtis B said...

I like the overall concept and the large snow flurries give it a feeling that you are actually there. I agree that the blending could be better.

Charlsey Foster said...

Has depth for sure, and the blending in the back looks awesome, but I feel the objects in the front, the ship and shark, seem a little off like they need to be blended more. Good work overall.

Aaron said...

agreed. The horizon line on the shark photo is way lower than the ocean one.

And the ship is too sharp, crisp in comparison to the rest.

Unknown said...

well everyone already said all that can be said. I like the idea indeed, kinda a "james and the giant peach" scene.

Teresa said...

Seems like the boat could have been a little bigger. Overall, it's nice.